Hey Alliyah! I was wondering if you could take a look at my two most recent poems!

Take as long as you need and if you can only review one please review "My Best Friend"


I have never requested a review before, so by asking for a link I assume you mean this?
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Softballgirl333/I-am-Queer-146510
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Softballgirl333/My-Best-Friend-146535


Edit: I am not looking for anything in particular with these reviews,

I need someone to review my poems:
Death
Cup of tea

Hello @alliyah! I would love it if you looked at my poem: Lonely Company
Thank you so much for considering!

Hey @alliyah! I'd love it if you could take a look at these two poems:
Tattooed On My Heart
Bullet On My Dresser
Thank you so much!

Hello alliyah !

I value the advice in your reviews and I was hoping you could review the second draft of this first villanelle I wrote —https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Traves/Last-walk-2nd-draft-147517

I don't need anything too detailed , just some main pointers for a next draft. I'm trying to improve the work since editing is my weak point.

Thanks!

Can you review my newly published poem?

Under the sunlight
Under the sunlight

Hi alliyah! I've read around and found out you're really passionate about poetry. I've also looked at some of your reviews and you went into detail to analyze the poems. I hope you could do the same for me.

Here is the link to my poem!
From East to West

Great Mistress of poetry, may I request a review for my work, City of the Stars ?

Aha ~ after many months I have caught up! Review thread is open for poetry for RevMo!

Edit: nevermind!

Hey alliyah! I know this thread is closed, but there are a couple of poems I'd adore alliyah-reviews on, so I'm just going to drop them here for when you reopen this thread.

Heat Absorption Lab

baked goods in the mirror

Absolutely no rush or pressure to get to them anytime soon! Just whenever life is less busy and you have the chance and are in the mood for some reviewing <3

Yay! I will actually get to these !!! I also owe you a review for checklist challenge so this is a perfect reminder to myself not to forget that.

@starlitmind @editorandperks @ShadowVyper @Valkyria @harryhardy @IcyFlame @mellifera @tuckster @gravitemwhatisyournewusername @THECuRSEDCAT @Vil

You can help me remember that I owe you a review by leaving a link here for a work you want reviewed, trying to wrap this up by 2021. thank you for your abundant patience.

Yay! Reviews!

I haven't written any poetry in the past several weeks, but I experimented a bit with one of my more recent poems, and I'd love to know what you think about my stylistic choices/the work as a whole

there is no failure without 'i'

I was thinking about the reviews and personalized poems this morning, so thanks for reading my mind XD

I revised my first YWS work, and you reviewed the original. Here's the new one--

The Devil's Song of Ismelda the Sixth (Revised)

@alliyah, I really have nothing I want your criticism on currently. I wanna save that for when I write something better

edit: something better than all I've written so far

Here's a little poem I wrote!

Would It Be So Bad?