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Re: Cascades of Time (Chp 7)
Greetings! So, we've started at last to get the hang of this. This is getting really interesting. there are still a few places where commas are needed but as you ...
Sep 8, 2012 -
Re: Cascades of Time (Chp 6)
Hey there, So this is really getting into something.this is a particularly good chapter. you've started piecing together all the stuff. I might be wrong but I think you want ...
Sep 7, 2012 -
Re: Cascades of Time (Chp 5)
Hey Myst, I agree with the back sheep. it was good seeing you settle for one scene for a change. I really don't have a lot to say about this ...
Sep 7, 2012 -
Re: Cascades of Time (Chp 4)
Hello Myst, This is the best chp so far, because you stuck with one scene for the right amount of time and let action happen. you didn't jump from one ...
Sep 7, 2012 -
Re: Cascades of Time (Chp 3)
Good day! Okay, so her goes my review, hope it comes to any use. Technical stuff As soon as Lucas bought the woman to the house [ comma] news spread ...
Sep 6, 2012 -
Re: Cascades of Time (Chp 2)
Greetings! Well, I feel I don't have much to say except for a few things. It's still full of characters doing minimal stuff and I'm not sure what is happening. ...
Sep 6, 2012 -
Re: Hot Winter (Chapter 3)
hey fairyreader, Here to review chapter three. I agree with most of the stuff Noelle and Incandenza have said and I'm not quite sure if there is anything new to ...
Sep 5, 2012 -
Re: Cascades of Time (Chp 1)
Hello Myst, i know it's quite late to dive into the novel and you already have very constructive reviews but I'll try to do my best. So here goes, commas ...
Sep 5, 2012 -
Re: Morphine Angel
Greetings! Ma'am, I have to say that this story (a pure teen drama) is quite common. Don't get me wrong, it's quite good but it's just that this whole kind ...
Aug 28, 2012 -
Re: Remember Everything
Hello Ryder, what you have here is a genuinely good piece of story telling. I'll talk about a few aesthetic stuff in this review. hope that comes off any help ...
Aug 27, 2012 -
Re: I Want To Have Sex, But Not Nearly As Much As Most Boys
Hey Ajt! I've never reviewed lyrics before so thought of giving it a try. here goes: TITLE: provocative, elegiac, straightforward VOICE: a teen girl expressing her views on how bored ...
Aug 24, 2012 -
Re: I Don't Know
Alright, MY first thought after reading: this is weird! i think this is supposed to humorous and it is, if you think about it in a rather surreal sort of ...
Aug 16, 2012 -
Re: The Listener
greetings, okay, to lighten things up let me relate to you a very popular statement among us likewise people ( seemingly i myself was having the same problems, with teachers ...
Aug 16, 2012 -
Re: A Wise Man Foretold
hello okay, first thing's first: I love experimentation and what you have here is a unique thing. you talked about wisdom and how to acquire it. in this essay you ...
Aug 16, 2012 -
Re: The Weak Man's Pride
wow, Greetings! Puck here to review the story you put into this is amazing and you showcased the feelings and stuff really vividly. a really beautiful rendition of an old ...
Aug 13, 2012
