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Hey! Che here for a quick review :-) I liked this poem! It spoke the truth, and I thought that the odd structure and rhyme scheme/meter actually added to the ...

Hey, Che here for a quick review :-) First off, I honestly loved this poem. It was just written extremely well and flows so well. The imagery is so strong ...

I saw you posted a part four to this and I realise I hadn't read the other three parts so here I am! I liked this! It was funny- Jilly ...

Hey! I'll just note what I notice as I read through and conclude at the end :-) First, You start a lot of sentences with the pronoun "I" which can ...

I don't know if this is what you meant, but I'll go over grammar for you :-) First picture: It's "Opposite" not opisite. It would make more sense to say ...

Hey :-) Che here for a quick review! First of all, this poem had a very clear message that you got across to me. It was very emotive and brings ...

Hey there :-) First off, I thought that the imagery in this poem was very strong and came across very well. I loved that you compared emotions to nature and ...

Hey there! So, I really liked the imagery that came across in the story/dream. It was very vivid and I could picture it very well! However, so many sentences started ...

This was not what I expected when I clicked on the title! This made me chuckle a few times, especially the bit "You may experience some confusion," she said dully. ...

I'm sat here in my science lesson, not paying attention to something I probably should be, totally enthralled by your poem! Honestly, i cannot think of anything to critique or ...

Woah, that was a long poem, I kind of didn't expect it to keep going! I'm sat in the middle of a boring science revision lesson right now, and it ...

I could really feel the emotions you portrayed in this. In fact, I have felt exactly like this many times before! I liked the structure, as it really feels like ...

I could really feel the emotions in this. It had really great imagery :-) However, I do wish the rhyme scheme had been a little more consistent, as it started ...

The rhyming in this was really nice, and worked really well! I also really loved the structure, as it flowed well and sounded really great when read out loud :-) ...

woah, this was so hard hitting. It was so brutal, truthful and full of the kind of raw emotion and expression a lot of people are too scared to put ...