Young Writers Society

I posted this on my other forum but nobody's critiqued it yet, so please critique it. anyway, it's actually Gone Away Home but I've posted it a million times, so ...

(where in our hero find out more about death then he would like to know) Where was I, I tried to remember something anything, but the only thing I could ...

Yeah. Here it is. So critique and rate.: Deidre coughed as the ash surrounded her. “This is like a replay of what just happened at my house!” Deidre screamed, struggling ...

I finally finished editing. I took a break from it; so it took a little long. So yeah, finally. Please critique and rate.: A thick cloud of ash poured into ...

A great boom of thunder shook the ground and the door flew open with a slam. The plates hanging inside the tavern shook and a few threatened to fall and ...

Chapter One: “Well, I’ll be darned,” commented a voice from behind me. “If it isn’t Ashlee Amber Hauterive.” Now, I’ll be honest with you. When I hear the voice of ...

White fog. That is all I'm able to see is white fog. It's like the kind that comes from the bay every morning and fogs up my bedroom window; adding ...

this is the prequel to the unnamed story, some one asked me if i would post it on its own the prequal: I am so tired……..tired of morals, tired of ...

Yeah it's a lot different than before because if someone tells me something's wrong with it,I edit like crazy. Anyway, please critique... or else lol: A thick cloud of ash ...

The Start of Things Miranda wasn’t surprised when the ghost that lived in her garage finally spoke to her, she had suspected it would ever since she figured out that ...

Moop. What happened to my other story thread? O.o

i reposted it, so ignore this topic.

True trickery is false(part one) I am no hero, I am no saint, hell even antagonists would back away in revulsion from the mere mention of my name . I ...

I have no idea how long I had been walking then again I didn’t even know who I was or how I got into this desert, I knew was that ...

This is an ending to a book I wrote. Just a kind of...sample of my writing. Letting you know, the first sentence in the book was "There is a place ...