The Most Beautiful Melody

I had to comment on this,see, I have a love for simple things that speaks volumes. Just like how you have captured the moment here, and you are absolutely right because there is no better sound than the sound of life.

Well, I do like the sound of freedom, as they soar into the sky.

But, amazing!

Hey Tiny here!


I love the simplicity of it. Who new something so powerful could be less than 25 words? I only have one comment though, I thought the 3rd line would sound better if It was written like this.

"It is the rhythm of my sweet beating heart."

I know it sounds kind of wordy, but its just what I would have done. I think it was fantastic though, just the way it is.

Keep writing

This is beautiful! I love it!! <3

Very short but very effective. That came across to me as if it was meant to show that life is beautiful from the moment it starts, weather it was meant to have that effect or not I don't know but that's certainly the way it came across to me

Very good

These three lines are very moving in a curious way. I particularly enjoy your depiction of rhythm as both a theme and a device. The words you chose and their syntax are both so musical that the poem itself sings to its reader. I truly enjoyed this piece. Change nothing!

Short and sweet as my people say.

When I first saw the title of your poem, I was expecting something really long. Now that I've read it, I'm wondering: "How can you review something like this?" Hm...I'll give it a shot.

This simple three line poem is...wow. It just shouts "Hey! You are worthy of living!" There's nothing more to say about it.

I've never really been a big fan of poetry (maybe it's because we have to TP-CASTT so many poems in school), but I absolutely loved this. In so little words, you've expressed the beauty of being alive.

Good job, dude.

Hello my friend! I'm back for another review with the Apple Dumpling Gang!

Once again, phenomenal poem! I love the rhythm and rhyme once again! I usually don't enjoy short poems, but this one was captivating! It put a smile on my face and made me remember that life is worth living! With only three lines! Wow! Great job!

There was only one error I noticed and it was the spelling of the word rhythm. You spelled it without the h!

Nice work! Keep it up! I'll be back for more reviews!

Happy Review Day!

Keep writing!
~BlimeyLimey217

Hello! Like I said before, I love your poetry so much that I just can't get enough of it! So I'm back with yet another review!

Really, this poem is wonderful. I don't know how you can think of these simply amazing three-line poems! Whenever I try to express something with only a few simple words, it always sounds forced. You've created a perfect image with using any big, fancy words or phrases, or elaborating into long poetic sentences. The simplicity of your writing is what makes it so amazing.

The idea behind this poem, that I was able to glean, is that life is a precious, beautiful thing. If your heart isn't beating, your dead, or about to be dead. So, if you can't hear your heart beating, then your life is over.

This poem's wording doesn't have any strange, uncommon, or fancy words in it. Only common, run-of-the-mill phrases. But the fact that you used ordinary, everyday words makes it that much better! Sometimes, a poem may have a really good meaning, but you can find it behind all of the flashy unique words the author used.

Thank-you again for this lovely poem!

Happy Review Day!

yubbies21

So simple, yet so powerful. I felt the appreciation for life I feel every time I see the moon and stars. It's that wonderment, and love for just being alive that allows me to see the beauty in everything. This poem made me listen to my heart. It truly is a wonderful beat. Keep writing, this was beautiful.