Chapter 3- The Heartz Chronicles

by lovelydove

Published December 8, 2025

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Then I awakened.

Moonlight spilled across my bedroom floor. My head throbbed, and for a moment, I couldn't remember how I got here. The last thing I remembered was that strange shimmer in the corridor... and then darkness swallowed me whole.

"Was that... a dream?" I whispered, brushing my fingers against the cool sheets. But my chest told me otherwise—there was this lingering urgency, like something out there needed me.

Then I saw her. Across the room, a faint silhouette moved. My heart skipped a beat. The curtains rustled, and there she was—Heartz. Her expression was calm, but her eyes glinted with determination.

"You're awake," she said softly, stepping closer. Her hand hovered near my shoulder, unsure if she should touch. "I tried to reach you before... but something pulled you away."

I swallowed hard, still dizzy. "I... I don't remember much," I admitted. "Everything went dark... and now—" My words faltered.

She knelt beside me, our knees almost touching. "You don't need to remember all at once," she said, calm but insistent. "Whatever happened, it's important. And you're not alone in this. I'll help you make sense of it."

''Make sense of what?'' I suddenly yelled. ''I just got stuck into another dimension, and the character from my story is talking to me! Maybe Jasmine was right, I'm officially crazy!''

Heartz blinked at me but didn't falter.

''You are the one who wrote my family's story. And you are the only one to change it for the better'', she said softly.

I felt a flicker of hope spark across my face. Maybe I could be the hero—not of this world, but of another world that needed me. But that hope quickly vanished. How could I, just a mere high schooler, save this world? What if I failed? And... what if people left me again? 

I couldn't bear the pain of that happening again. Not ever.

''As if Heartz. I'll end up failing like I do with everything else. And I don't want that to happen to your world''.

"Zissy," she said softly, stooping down to me on the bed, her tone almost motherly, "listen to this:

When shadows fall and fear takes hold,
Remember the stories your heart has told.
The smallest hand can change the tide,
And even the lost can learn to guide.

I paused. I remembered this poem.

Heartz softly smiled. ''You are the one who wrote that. If you can write a poem such as this, and make me come to life with your heart, you can do anything.

''I'll be here with you, every step. You're not alone in this—not for a single moment."

Her words wrapped around me like a warm blanket. Somehow, in that simple rhythm, I could feel the courage in my chest, faint but real.

''B-but what if I-

She shushed me gently. ''There is no such thing as failing. You only fail when you give up. And I know you haven't given up yet. You haven't given up on me and my world. You write about us all the time, never stopping.''

I thought about it. At least I could try. Try and make things right for her world.

I nodded. ''Ok... Let's do this.''

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Tikaya wrote a review Review · Dec 11, 2025

Onto Ch3 immediately 😉

Ah and aren’t “Then I awakened. I woke with a start” just the same thing?

Feels like if you leave out the first sentence you have a much better first paragraph for this chapter.

Oh Heartz came into her world now? I like that this is kinda happening over the mirror! Nvm we are still in the other world but I still like this. I also kinda like how calm Heartz is abt all of this, provides a nice contrast to Lissy’s panic abt how her life is spiralling out of control.

I’m curious abt Lissy’s relationship with this world. Did she create it and can she influence it or did she just create Heartz and her struggles and family and can only directly influence this? That is very peculiar :3

I couldn't bear that pain. Not ever.
I couldn't bear the pain of that happening again. Not ever.
Again these strange repetitions. Did you read over this chapter before posting it?

I wish we knew what exactly the world needs saving FROM? Yes Julian is kinda turning evil or something but there was no explanation nor any indication on what Heartz wants her to do. There’s just this outright rejection from Lissy. When the first thing that comes to mind is her just… writing a different ending for the story?
I really just want you to clearly state what these characters intent to do? How do they intent to start??? Because “Let’s do this” as an end to this chapter? DO WHAT?! It’s nice of Heartz to encourage Lissy but… what?

creeperfeverdreams wrote a review Review · Dec 10, 2025

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today!

Shalt we commence with the atrocious S’more?

Top Graham Cracker - Zissy seems to wake up from a “dream”, but as it turns out, it was real! She is not sure how she will save the day, but Heartz helps her out!


Slightly Burnt Marshmallow - I want to learn more about Jasmine and Zissy’s struggles in the real world, but I’m sure that will happen later.

Chocolate Bar - I like that poem Heartz sings to Zissy, it’s very sweet. I also like how she cares about Zissy and looks after her when she’s feeling down. Another thing I have enjoyed is Zissy’s fear, it is very evident that she is frightened by all this, but her determination is touching! I hope to see more stuff with action later on!

Closing Graham Cracker - Overall, a very relaxing chapter! I hope that Zissy is able to stop this madness and save Heartz and the rest of the characters in the story! I shall check out in the next chapter but…

I wish you a glorious day/night! ^v^



Men occasionally stumble over the truth, but most of them pick themselves up and hurry off as if nothing had happened.
— Winston Churchill