So sweet,
so pure,
you act very demure,
I love you~
my honey bun
So loving
so kind,
I'm glad that you're mine
I love you~
So handsome,
So tall,
you brighten it all,
a light in the room when you walk through.
So steady,
So true
the world feels brand‑new with all that you do.
I might be obsessed with you my dear
but your voice is the only sound I hear.
take me in your arms
and let me stay there
forever.
Every time you glance my way
and the way your eyes light up when I say,
I love you~
I love you~
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I really love the flow of this poem. It makes the whole thing feel a lot more natural.
The whole idea of "puppy love" is that falling in love with one person forgives you a warm, soft feeling, like you've just met your other self. You found out who you were; you found your true meaning. You found yourself in times of trouble, in times of need, you found your purpose in life. You found that one day, you're going to better despite the odds.
"So sweet/you act very demure" are simple, yet powerful lines. I like simplicity in poems; it could be interpreted in different ways. Could It be twoblivers? A parent talking to their child? Could It be a sign of respect rather than full-one love? There are so many ways to interpret love, but they all come with the idea that you've found your other half. What matters is that you know you are, you know you've suffered enough and don't want to tell your child the same. It makes sense given that love is a concept as old as time itself.
This poem could be interpreted in a number of different ways. No matter what kind of love you're dealing with, it all relies on the idea that you've found another soul willing to care for you. You know you're not alone. Yoy know you have supports who can help and deal with you. They're here for you, and you realize that. They really care about you, and you should start knowing you can deal with those behaviors. Love is possibly the best way to handle that, and it's very much a good thing.
This poem explores the concept of love in a simple, yet effective way. 5/5
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Cute picture, really fitting for the summary of that poem :3
I like how the poem guides the eyes, as if jumping down the stares. It gives everything a very excited feeling! Aww this is really, really bubbling with positive feelings. You have no idea how much I needed that :3 Also I find it a bit funny and adorable that you mention that the other person acts very demure :3
Thank you for your review, and I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!