Place of stillness

Wow , this is really good. I like the flow. Also it has great detail and as I read it , I created a mental image in my head of the big old oak tree. I think the ending was brilliant.

" silent and still,
this place stands alone,
the world leaves it behind,
and I'm traped inside"

This stanza is my Favorite.
I think you have great talent.
Great job


-t

I really like the mood of this piece. Your images really give off that feeling of a frozen scene, especially the mention of the robin with its wings outspread. However, I did note numerous misspellings throughout the poem, such as "groons" (groans), "quite" (quiet), "takeing of" (taking off), and "sliggish" (sluggish). Then there are common errors, such as the homonyms "seams" (a place where two pieces of fabric are sewn together) instead of "seems" and "creeks" (multiple small streams) instead of "creaks." But all of these are easily fixed. I just recommend using a spell-check system and always proofing for typos. Technicalities aside, this poem overall had a very lovely mood that was well-portrayed. Very nice job.