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Ain't Even Close To Slick

by VousEsEtonnant


You ain't nowhere close to slick.
Its more like you're such a dick.
you really think that you're the shit.
but you ain't nowhere close to it.

What you say about my mom?
fucker, all yo' swag is gone.
think you help this world along.
Bitch, you got your facts all wrong.

You're just another wannabe.
there's something here that you don't see.
you can never be like me,
I'd put you down like 1, 2, 3. 

So go ahead and play your game.
you'll only be a fucking lame. 
You ain't ready for my fame,
so bitch just get out of my lane. 

'cuz you ain't nowhere close to slick.
but I bet you think you is!
You ain't even all that quick
so why you talk like you know shit?

Hoe, just get out of my face.
you make yo' family disgraced.
Think this is up for debate?
Well that really ain't the case.

I'm gonna stop before I flip.
before I'm mad and you get hit. 
You're just too dumb to get it.
so whatever, see ya bitch. 


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Thu Mar 22, 2012 5:07 am



Heyo.. Wow...I loved reading it!! it flows really well....and i could relate to it...though in my case it's a guy... So I love the rhyme...its gone all the way perfectly...the flow is continuous and does not quiver a note...Lovely...
Harshita:)





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