The Strength to Say

by TheClosetKidnapper

Published May 5, 2012

In Poems

Voices ring like wedding bells,

laughter sounds like hope;

it's nice that you've found happiness,

but you completely forgot about me.

We used to be friends, allies;

we used to have each other's backs.

Now, you've gone and abandoned

the one you'd swear you never left. 

It's nice to know I'm loved;

it's nice to know you care.

But we were meant to stick together,

and you ran the first chance you got.

I scream at the top of my lungs,

yet you still don't hear.

What's the point of holding on

if there's nothing here?

I just want to thank you,

for leaving me behind.

My heart shatters and shimmers,

until I've spoken every line.
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VampireSenshi wrote a review Review · May 28, 2012

Rocky! I officially love your poetry! It inspires me so much! It makes me think.

I really like how this poem flows, like a river of emotion. At one point, I read a couple lines and though it rhymed because it flowed so well. But it didn't, not that that matters because this is such a good poem.

If you stop writing, the world will be deprived of some truly awesome poetry.



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