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I really like your style Rocky! The lines are short, small, but so full of emotion and meaning. Sometimes the best poetry is the most simple, ones like a story. That come from personal experience. I wish I could say the same, not like I don't do that. But you know what I mean.
I really really like your poetry Rocky. Keep Writing!!!!
I liked this, it was simple and almost plain, but it conveyed the emotion, the sense of not being good enough, and then at the same time the knowledge that you are good enough. If that made any sense. I didn't catch any mistakes, though I wasn't looking super carefully. Anyway, this was simple, so maybe you could try and write something similar but with more imagery and detail and such. However, I personally like this one the way it is.