Hullo there from Dixie! This is VP with a review!
Oh. My. Lord.
That was amazing, in my not-so-humble opinion. Maybe I'm finally cracking, like most writers do at some point or another, but I could've sworn I heard hooves tapping against a floor halfway through. There are few poems that allow me to see an image so clear, so refined... and yet, a blur all the while.
I do believe that this Narrator could have been someone younger, maybe reckless, reckless enough that it cost her the life she had. This girl, I think, is dead, and her death has allowed her to be "entranced with the winners".
You're style of poetic writing is unique. Rereading it a... third time, I think... I am comparing what I believe Heaven and Hell to be-- I'm seeing pretty, elegant words where simpler ones could be used just as greater, more powerful people normally do not have the humility and humbleness required to be godly. It has a certain... je ne sais quoi, really.
I hope to have the chance to read and review more of your work soon!
-VP
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