Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
First Impression: Well, this little play here just keeps getting better the more I read....ahh...I'm having so much fun reading a more light hearted thing for a change....well...down to more details.
Anyway let's get right to it,
Setting: The treehouse of the three kids.
(The three kids sat there in silence thinking about what to do. It had been a week since the brothers left and they haven't thought of anything to do yet.)
(Sniffs) I miss my parents. My mom used to tuck me in every night and give me a little biscuit. Now I can't even get one if I wanted to. They're on the top shelf...
Oh dear...we are starting off on quite a sad note here.
(looks sadly at the floor) I miss my parents too. They're like zombies, just wandering around with those silly looks on their faces. And I can't live on cereal and bread forever...
(Scowls) It's not fair. Why do we have to suffer just because they want to rule the world. I want to rule the world but I don't actually try and do it. If I did I would be making life unfair for many other people.
Oh dear...the evil plan is really starting to take proper effect on the world now I see...well...poor kids...uhh...let's see how this goes I suppose.
Exactly, Sebastian. (sighs) But... I guess adults can be power-hungry sometimes... and they do stupid things for that power. (Shakes head and straightens up) Anyways, let's not get all depressed, hope isn't lost yet, right?
Oh definitely, giving up hope is never an option, we all know this.
Well were not going to stop them just the three of us. They have lots of tech and lots of minions anyways. Only if we had more peop- (Suddenly there is a knock on the door) Huh? (SEBASTIAN gets up to answer it.) Hello
(A little girl looking about the age of five stood there with a little worn out stuffed bunny)
Um. Hello... Could you please help me. My parents are acting all wacky and won't lisen to anything I ask. They just run around all day...
Oh, everything is about to get a whole lot more wholesome...or so I sense...maybe.
(looks sadly at the girl) Yeah, that's how the world is right now... Well, why don't you come in? Maybe we can think of something together. What's your name?
(hugs bunny tighter) My name is Annie. What's yours?
Ahh...even the bunnies are involved....ahhh...cuteness overload detected...
I'm Kit, and this is Gus and Sebastian. (gestures at the other kids) Right now we're trying to figure out how to take the bad guys down. Any ideas?
Wait. If she wasn't affected either than maybe there are others!
Is that a potential plan I smell in the air?
Oh! If all the children in America weren't affected... that means... we could potentially have an army to fight with!
An army of sugar filled kids.
Oooh I love this plan already....
This might just work!
(in a bossy voice) All right, everyone! First course of action, gather as many unaffected children as you can and meet back here. It's time to stop moping and start working! Whatcha waiting for? Let's get to it! (waves the other kids out of the treehouse, then climbs down herself)
Oh here we go, team jellybeans...although now I must say it could be renamed to team sugar high is making its first move...
(All of the kids took one direction and began searching. A couple of hours later they had checked all over town and returned to the treehouse with a crowd of children.)
Thirty-seven, thirty-eight, thirty-nine! Thiry-nine kids!
Thirty nine is a good number.
Awesome! (stands on tippy toes and looks at the crowd) Okay, y'all! Thanks for coming here today! As you know, something strange has happened to our parents, and we need to fix it pronto. Soon. Right this instant. (jabs a finger into her palm) WITHOUT HESITATION! (takes a breath, calms down) Ahem. Anyways, our targets are the two brothers running this thing. We need to stop them from making more cookies. And hopefully they'll have a way to cure the sugar disease too!
Yoohoo....things are happening I see...
Sounds great Kit! But how are we going to gather all of the kids in the USA? We can't just look for all of them. And we can't walk either. My body isn't cut out for it.
Well... I could probably figure out how to drive my parents' car, but I'm not sure how to gather all the kids. Seb, what do you think?
Yeah driving around doesn't seem much more practical than walking around.
Well when the brothers wanted to spread the news of their cookies they got on the news. Maybe we do that too. I'm sure especially now there are a lot of kids watching television!
Ooh great idea! All right, Seb-- you think you can figure out how to do that?
Ooh...I hope this plan involves the jellybeans somehow...maybe...just a theory.
I can try. (Pulls up his computer and starts typing.)
Awesome. Now, let's see... Gus, can you find snacks for all these kids? It's no good to make war plans on an empty stomach.
SOme very, very good ideas there...especially the empty stomach part.
That I can do! See you in twenty minutes max! (Begins slowly tumbling towards his house.)
Found it! All we need to do is find one of those news reporter stations. They should have everything we need there!
Oooh....that's going to be interesting...no jellybeans I see...though sadly.
Great! I think there's a news station about a thirty minute walk down that way (she points out the door of the treehouse, then turns to the crowd of kids) Okay listen up, people! Raise your hands if you want to go with Seb here and hack into a news station!
(About a fourth of the kids in the crowd raised there hands.)
Great! Follow me! (They all march in semi-straight line behind SEBASTIAN)
Semi straight lines are always the best...
(raises voice) Remember everyone... those villains may have won the battle. But they most certainly haven't won the war!
(the kids all cheer and head towards their assigned tasks)
YES INDEED...well another satisfying part comes to an end....
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall it looks like this is just continuing to get better...and I am loving where this is going...and sadly I think we're done reviewing everything that has been uploaded so far, so I'll just wait patiently for more parts to come out...
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.