Rose

King here

I was even invited..oh well. Anyways, I really like this and you know how picky I am, dear. *jokenojoke*

I trully like it. It is short and simple but still has that complexity in it, expressing your feelings and showing your heart as a very delicate rose that you are trying protect from being taken by someone. It is really sweet. I do not have complains actually and it is very short so we can not think of a way to improve it, I quess. I only have two corrections to make and I will leave you alone...and I wanted to be harsh on you so much.

It became a part of me.

away from every ones eyes.

Heyo, it's Braiden here for a review on Review Day!

First off, this poem really shows that age does NOT determine talent or wisdom.

I loved this work! It was really beautiful, and VERY well-written. I loved how you compared the rose to your heart as well; I've often seen a rose symbolize love, but I don't think I e ever seen it directly represent a heart.

with the slightest tint of black in it

Hey Dogs here to give a comment!

I don't really know what to say. I really loved the poem! It was amazing! Thanks for sending me the link! I really liked it, and can't wait to read more of your work

Keep up the great writing,
Love,
Dogs

Hey! I'm new, so please excuse me if my review isn't the /best/. But, I'll try!
After reading your poem I sat here and just stared at my computer for a moment. It was absolutely magnificent! I really love it!
My favorite lines from this were,"To easy to get lost, to easy to be crushed."
I related to these lines a lot, because I feel like I'm too fragile at heart.
Well.. There were a few nitpicks I did see(to me, anyway, I could be wrong about this.)
In the third line,"with," isn't capitalized like the other lines are. I forget to do the same thing when I write a poem at times!
The next thing was in my favorite lines."To easy to get lost, to easy to be crushed." If I'm not mistaken, this should be written as,"Too easy to get lost, Too easy to be crushed." I believe that's right!
Besides those three tiny things, there wasn't anything I could see that was wrong with your poem! It's absolutely impressive and amazing! I'm so glad I read it when I seen it in the Literary Spotlight!
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece!

This was really impressive, especially for your age. I loved how you used your words, they were warm, yet had cold undertones to it. A very calm yet colorful piece. Very well done. The heart and rose are pretty similar in my opinion because they are both soft and beautiful things. You wove a web of poetic beauty that I just couldn't pass up.

Did u metaphorised rose for your heart?

Wohoa that was pretty impressive good job bud.