How do I?

Beautiful and well framed.
for a second i thought how deeply you were affected by love.
The poem seemed as if it came straight out of your so called "bruised and stitched" heart
perfectly positioned the words forgiven and forgetting.

"I have forgiven,it says but forgetting is a harder battle to win" the best lines in the poem,totally awestruck by this.
I can see a lot of pain behind this(of course it is conveyed so)hope you recover soon.
In the last line of the first stanza, i feel you should have used a lot more deeper or more painful thing. That line is distracting the beauty behind the poem.
finally a good one, totally loved it
keep going,keep improving.

Ah yes, this is sweet.

Review time.

Good start, simple and to the point. There are punctuation errors, however. At the beggining of ever line in powetry you should begin with a capital letter. Ex.

Live. Live. Smile.
They say
But how? My brain screams
How do you breathe when your head is underwater?

By doing that it seems to have a more natural flow, and looks more professional in the end.

Last line, "How do I love when I'm already bleeding?" This confused me a little, was it meant to be the word live and it got switched for love?

I thought the whole poem was well expressed, and I hope you are happy with it. I hope this review was helpful. Keep in writing!