Vanished

Hi there!

I've got a few things to point out.

First things first; Punctuation! Punctuation can be really, really important. It can change the entire view, and one's perspective of the poem. Sadly, I didn't see any punctuation in here.

So here is where you can use punctuation, though you must not have to only place them there. This is the most basic placement.

I can't believe that
You're actually gone

Vanished
Left from my presence

Never to be seen again
Atleast not after what I did

I broke you down
Leaving you as nothing

Forever to be rejected
And alone

Now that you've left me
It's still to much for me

You gave me your heart
But I wouldn't give you mine

You trusted me
I decieved you

You ask why I do
What I do to you?

So I tell you
Because I can

Now you slip away
Into the dark

Forever broken and
Destroyed

Because I never loved you
Like you did me

I can't believe that,
You're actually gone.

Vanished,
Left from my presence.

Never to be seen again,
Atleast not after what I did.

I broke you down,
Leaving you as nothing,

Forever to be rejected,
And alone.

Now that you've left me,
It's still to much for me.

You gave me your heart,
But I wouldn't give you mine.

You trusted me,
I decieved you.

You ask why I do,
What I do to you?

So I tell you,
Because I can.

Now you slip away,
Into the dark,

Forever broken and
Destroyed.

Because I never loved you,
Like you did me.

Vanished
Left from my presence

Now that you've left me
It's still to much for me