It falls apart
From the very start
Everything I touch
Falls apart
Everything around me
Crumbles and dies
Every since you left,
And when I walked away
From you...
And I didn't try to get you back
Why doesn't anyone see
Everything that is falling apart
I know I should
But... I can't
I know you're right
but...I chose not to believe
I'm so behind
And you're so above me
I will not let it go to waste
I'm taking all I got
And leaving this place
I will not be taking up space
I'll take my best shot
I'm picking up the pace
Everything around falls apart
Everthing I touch
Crumbles and dies
I fall apart in front
Of you
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Sis, I had no idea you had this hidden talent. Jeez. It's really good, except for the whole rhyme scheme seems a little unsettles, and the stanzas aren't patterned, but I guess those details really don't matter. It still turned out great!