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really good poem. i"m not the best at reviewing other peoples work but....
this is a nice poem about love killing slowly.
"The love is fast and widely spread
And can infect you in a heart beat
Only strong ones survive" that is so true. great job!!!
Thank you very much these comments help me a lot when I write my poems.
Remind me to tell you how good this is when you get back!
Oh I will
Hi, Fallen here, and I must say, this piece is really great:) It really gives the reader a feel for what you are trying to get across to them. And it's true, which makes it even better. And I love the way you put it together. The words are put together in a way that makes the poem flow while also making you feel it as you are reading.
"It's a pleasure
At first
Then the pain hits you
So sudden it's numb
To everything...
But your heart
The venom seeps through
Getting into your blood
then eating away at your very
Soul"
I really liked that part. It tells you how love can be a good thing at first, but the aftereffects are extremely painful. It also tells just how painful love can be. Nicely done.
Thanks I was aiming for something like that, very helpful to me.