HI ITS ME xD
You're songs = my favorite songs.
Okay. lets get into it xD
For some reason I feel like reviewing this like poetry. Eh, lets give that a shot since Poetry and Lyrics go hand and hand.
There is very good length control on this, which is great. Some songs you can sneak a long line or two in there, but most usually not. So that's a plus, even though as Timmy said, the first two lines are short. But as stated above about long lines can also go along with shorter lines.
TIMMY STOP STEALING THE WORDS FROM MY KEY-TYPING.
I was going to mention something about narcissist...but whatevah.
I really think the last line in the chorus just sounds out of place >.< But you never know, cause sometimes when you sing something is different than just reading it. I wonder if I put it to my own tune...
Okay, I just tried that to "All of Me" by John Legend...It didn't really work with that tune xD
Annnnyyyyywayyyyy...
Okay, the thing I love about your songs the most is you use words that most people wouldn't. You're not cliche with the way you word things and I admire that, because that is a skill I can only wish to have.
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"Here's to the End" Is my fave
Hope this helped somewhat xD Sounds like a lot of nonsense looking back on it :p
-Kamryn-
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