I've been gone for far too long. o__o I see I have a lot of catching up to do! xD
AfterIspending two hours in a cubby hole
Cut the indicated.
I suppose I can't pretend to understand Ariana's motives. She sneaks on the ship, hides from the crew, then decides to approach one of them? How does this guard not recognize her? What's more is: is she getting desperate? Rather than sneak around the brig and look for him, she comes up to the prison guard and pretends to be a stowaway mortal that can only eat fae food.
About the fae thing -- what significance does that have? I'm sure that the guard would've noticed if one of the crew members was on a special diet. If he could only eat fae food, then there's no way the crew couldn't know about that. I feel like that has a big plot hole in there, so I suggest you try to fill it up.
I'm curious to see how this is gonna go. I'm surprised the pirate didn't demand payment up front or, at the very least, a fixed pay; as in, he demands to know how much Ariana's gonna give him.
Off to read the next chapter.
~Iggy
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