yoshikrab

Hey Lim! I checked this out yesterday but didn't have the time to review. Grammatical The boy was young, with a shock of white hair, a shade I'd generated from ...

Hi @choclatewings ! I'm @Yoshikrab , a user on this site! Welcome to YWS! We're glad you're here! I'm going to be here to review your work, but first-- like ...

Hi! This is certainly an interesting story. Hi @Kishu! I'm @Yoshikrab and I'm here for one of your first reviews! :D First off, welcome to YWS! I'm glad you're here! ...

Very good! I rarely see poems with such good meter and rhyme like this, so it's certainly a pleasant surprise! Grammatical Dang it-- I can't find anything grammatically wrong with ...

Very nice! This is a dramatic poem, so it's very nice and you have just the right amount of theme with a pleasant twist at the end. It's pleasant because ...

Wow! Nice poem! This is a pretty quiet and powerful, yet nondramatic, which is really cool! Grammatical Was the capitalization of "for" in the first line on purpose, or was ...

REQUESTED POEM REVIEW COMING UP!!!!! Hi, Alice! So since you requested this review . . . I'll review it! (Although, this isn't in the Green Room anymore so maybe that's ...

Wow! Nice poem! I love the dramatic phrasing and the line structure. Although, it would have been nicer with a stanza differentiation, but that could be YWS's problem. ANYWAYS Grammar ...

Very nice! I don't even want to try to un-riddle this poem, as it is way too mysterious for me. Grammatical having danced with abandon we seek a place to ...

Goodness gracious. This is certainly a very painful poem-- almost as if the narrator is trying to convince themself that this is what the subject wants. Although there is much ...

Nice poem! I know I really want to rattle on about rhyming and rhythm, but this is seriously a poem that doesn't need those two things. First off, a short, ...

Wow! This is a great poem! I love the imagery and the metaphoric phrases. It all contributes to an absolutely awesome poem! Sometimes when the rain falls You can see ...

Wow! Certainly a very serene poem! I think you did a GREAT job here! :D :D :D (Also, this is my first review for review day. TIME TO TAKE ON ...

Very good poem! This is what I would call a "Poetic" poem, as it is extremely abstract and descriptive. Good job! First, I have a question-- Was the title "Carcass" ...

too good very much too good. I don't have much to say except compliments if you don't mind ;_; How does he keep from screaming? Does he save the tears ...