Hey Arcticus!! Anne here for a review.
Wow! This was a really great poem. It was a good read. Though if someone like me , who doesn't know the story of Yeshua, reads it, the reason why he returns will be a little vague. But it's probably only because I've not heard the story. So it's fine
Now let's get into the details.
THEME
The message of this poem was intricate , introspective and a little bit suspenseful too. So I loved it. The words were very well chosen and the poem was well executed.
GRAMMAR
I agree with Yoshi. But I don't have anything else to say.
Also some verses were more appealing to me than the others.
where do you go first,
when you arrive from that wilderness
perhaps to your mother's door
to give her your peace
or to your friends: the few
and the treasured, or up a hill,
with your flock
Okay, so this is really subjective. But to me, this was the best verse. The fact that a son wants to give peace to his aged mother is so calming and complete in its own sense. The few and treasured phrase for friends is so lovely -one that the reader will always treasure after reading this poem.
Overall, this was a remarkable poem.
Eager to read more from you.
Keep writing
Points: 789
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