Very nice! I don't even want to try to un-riddle this poem, as it is way too mysterious for me.Grammatical
having danced with abandonwe seek a place to rest
In the clarity of the morningwe crave not the dizziness of winebut the cleansing tasteof water
In the end, we longnot for adventure, or thrillbut the prisonof a warm embrace
for doors that stayed openfor us, long afterwe had closed them
for doors that stayed open for us,long after we had closed them
hi ..your poem is wonderful and neat . you used the words nicely and also you used a simple language ,a plus point. the poem is small making it more beautiful. in second paragraph i liked the way you penned about water and the in third paragraph the way you represented the want of staying close to the person ..touches the heart . if you dont mind pls can you explain me the last paragraph..as i see the words you have written symbolises more meanings.
Beautiful! I love how this poem isn't overly dramatic, but rather just relatable and honest. Keep on writing.
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