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Beautiful short and sweet. I liked everything about it. It is just so natural. The story is all about care and love which is actually difficult to find in this ...

Good job i like the poem. I learnt something new from this poem. It good to think something new something different. You transformed a simple thoughts into something imaginative and ...

Hey Bambi Great writing dear. I enjoyed everything. Even if i found colloquial words which destroyed tge beauty but that faded away when i went through the poem. It is ...

Hi The poem has a good concept. The inner thoughts are revealed but the words are not catchy. It's quite thoughtful poem and the way of progression is touchy and ...

You can be a great witer one day may be one of the best. I read the whole stuff. But i want something more. I understood the you basically dealt ...

I guess you are pretty much confused. Honestly i didn't find anything unusual. You are just a regular normal guy pretty consumed in your own world struggling with some issues. ...

I am amazed. I love the way you have executed the eerie presence of an unwanted demonic life inside your mind. It is a great hit at least for me. ...

Beautiful letter for a beautiful girl. I guess when she will read it she will be the happiest person on this earth. She will gain her self confidence and can ...

Hi dear I like the poem. It shows the true nature of love. It reveals what basically you feel for him inside you. I see the emotions and passions inside ...

I like the poem. It is good enough to realize how life goes on. I think white light indicates the positivity. So basically it declares that all is well. Moreover ...

Wow... You made me speechless. People assume even i do too. It's how we look and the society taught us. I i loved the way you expressed. You made me ...

Nice poem. Written great. I'm in love with the concept. Our life is really ftrustrating these days. We get confused and dont understand how to deal with it. Basically its ...

Oh my god. I loved and enjoyed the words. You are the best supportive mother. I loved the way and respect your writing. You made me cry and realize the ...

Hi dear I like the explanation of the painful memories and the brotherhood. I can feel the pain of the guy losing his brother in the train accident. Everything is ...

Great story. I loved everything in it. It was simply creepy without no mess no decorations. I am amazed also i do believe in spirits and stuffs. My mom says ...