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Re: Senseless Hope
Yes!!!!!!!! Right before my very eyes is something that is not long-winded and dragging. Finally my eyes behold something that is short, sweet, and to the point. Thank you!!!! *calmed ...
Jun 30, 2015 -
Re: Between Storms
Hi! I like this poem. It was very confusing, because I am not used to songs and poems that are written like this, without the "beats per line and the ...
Jun 29, 2015 -
Re: A Single Second
Hi! I like this poem because it is so true. A word of advice to you: Time lost can never be found again. "A single second Inflicting scars To pull ...
Jun 29, 2015 -
Re: The reality of love
Hi! I really liked this piece/article. I like the topic. Everything here is so true. Now, I have some nitpicks for you. 1. "Amount" was misspelled. You added an extra ...
Jun 29, 2015 -
Re: Princess or Villain
Hello! I really liked this poem because of the creativity you put into it. I don't want to be a princess, nor do I want to be a villain. Most ...
Jun 26, 2015 -
Re: Any Day of the Week
*Pressed the "like" button* *Following Carlito* I like this song very much. I like what's it about. The beat was good. I liked that. And after reading it out loud, ...
Jun 17, 2015 -
Re: 2089: Love in the Time of War (Part 1 of 3)
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Jun 17, 2015 -
Re: Adonia, Beloved / Chapter 7
*Pressed the "like" button* I stumbled upon this piece, mostly because the title captured me. Even though I had not read the other stories, this was very good. I liked ...
Jun 16, 2015 -
Re: Shiny Black Shoes
Hi! I like what you have here. I think you did a good job. The idea was very creative. I would never have thought of writing a poem about boots. ...
Jun 15, 2015 -
Re: Lemon Custard
*Pressing the "like" button* This piece was very humorous. I liked it really, really much. The only thing I want to point out is get rid of the comma between ...
Jun 15, 2015 -
Re: Tomorrow's Tornado - Chapter 1
*Pressing the "like" button* This was a very-well written piece. The words you used were very good. I liked your style of writing. This story was a very creative one. ...
Jun 15, 2015 -
Re: Imaginary Friend
Hi! I love poetry and this, though not my cup of tea (I think most things are not my cups of tea) was well-written. I also like the idea. The ...
Jun 15, 2015 -
Re: My Imagination
Hi! I found this story very humorous and well-written. I liked the idea you had here. It was very creative. What I like about the story was really the writing. ...
Jun 13, 2015 -
Re: I Can't Write Haikus
Hi! There is literally not much to say.Haikus are interesting. I should really like to learn how to write them. I bet that would be fun. The only thing I ...
Jun 12, 2015 -
Re: Ode to a Circle
Hi! I really like this poem. I really do. I, for one, am not a fan of math. I sort of struggle on a few things. I just can't get ...
Jun 9, 2015