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*Pressed the "like" button* *Following Carlito*
I like this song very much. I like what's it about. The beat was good. I liked that. And after reading it out loud, it sounded very smooth. I liked everything about the verses. I don't know what else to say. It is just so good. Good luck and keep writing!!
Thanks for the star and the follow! Glad you liked it
Hi! there, Carlito
I, actually, find every verse sweet. It tells how you value the person very much. Especially the first verse:
^It takes a lot of effort to do that and more, if you're not a morning person. Hence, keeping him/her company at unexpected times.
I enjoyed reading this and would, perhaps, enjoy listening to. It was short yet it can really make someone smile.
Hope to read more from you.
>Cha
Haha I'm not great at getting up in the morning :p
Glad you liked it! Thanks for commenting
Well can't blame you for it, sleepy head. peace
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Hey there Carlito, The Silent Bagpipe here to review some of your work!
First off I'll tell you my thoughts on your lyrics when I read them - I thought these lyrics were cute and tell a adorable story. I smiled through it all because your lyrics were very cute and simple. Good job with that <3 One question I have for you was - what genre of song were you writing these lyrics in? Just so I can picture it in my head
On to the structure of your lyrics - I didn't seen anything to do with grammar mistakes, except there wasn't any punctuation. *Note that there doesn't have to be in a song, I just think it presents it better =)
This one is my favorite part of it -
' would walk for miles to see you
And I would drive fast in my car
Anything it takes to see you
It don’t matter where you are'
That's all I have for you today. Keep writing this was really good!
~Selina
Thanks for the review and the star!
Haha I kind of struggle with genre - we'll go with pop? Christina Perri is a big inspiration of mine, so whatever she is
Okay lol