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Re: Her everything
This was a nice poem to read.It’s so real,you really put your emotion to it.Yes,often as humans,we do rely on others heavily,you’re right about that.But when we put every fiber ...
Nov 29, 2021 -
Re: Curiosity
Lovely poem! We do often warn others about being “too curious”,don’t we? It’s not good, because curiosity is what makes this world go round.You’re right about there being a difference ...
Nov 28, 2021 -
Re: The Candle Melting
Wow! What a sweet poem! It shows the love that is out there in the world.I sure hope the old woman and her child grow to have a lovely relationship ...
Nov 27, 2021 -
Re: i've gotten worse // since we last spoke
I imagine that this poem is about revisiting horrible memories and wanting to escape your past,but being unable to,because the memories are overwhelming.You can’t escape them no matter what.You canâ
Nov 26, 2021 -
Re: CLICK
I liked this poem,it was fun to read.Maybe this person feels lost about who they are and what their purpose in life is.They want to be positive and happy,but can ...
Nov 25, 2021 -
Re: Wonderland
I liked this poem,it was cool! I loved how you described Wonderland in a few short lines.I also liked that you mentioned Dorothy,she and Alice kind of have the same ...
Nov 24, 2021 -
Re: Admission of the Whimsical
Lovely poem! I think this is about a common type of side character we may read about in fairytales and how they are overlooked.Maybe,it’s them sharing their feelings.Maybe this person ...
Nov 23, 2021 -
Re: I Will Always Stand by You
This was a sweet really shows that no matter what,the narrator will always stand by whoever they are addressing in the also shows that there are still people who will ...
Nov 22, 2021 -
Re: hell's angel
Oh wow…this poem scared me a bit.(In a good way) I thought this was about an angel getting rejected and sent to Hell,from the title,but after actually reading it,I think ...
Nov 21, 2021 -
Re: A broken piece
I loved reading this story! It really makes you think about who you are to your makes you wonder about your true intentions and your darkest secrets.The mirrors could all ...
Nov 20, 2021 -
Re: Storyteller Serves a Meal
I loved the poem.I thought it did nicely to explain the purpose and goals of the storyteller.The dishes symbolizes the stories the storyteller was telling.That’s another thing,I loved the use ...
Nov 19, 2021 -
Re: The Way It Changed
This was a fun story to read.About the ending…is Emma going to die? Also,can we trust Aiden? In this story,Aiden comes off as a loving boyfriend,but often,people that we trust ...
Nov 18, 2021 -
Re: The Corn Grows Towards The Sky
Cool and sad poem.I believe the poem talks about the things that happen which you can’t control in life.I thought it was interesting to choose the words:”I look around and ...
Nov 17, 2021 -
Re: Exit 17
I enjoyed reading this was sweet and romantic.I also enjoyed the writing style,how you added numbers and punctuation marks to the words and how you put parentheses in the some ...
Nov 16, 2021 -
Re: Nightmare
Oooh…cool poem.I love how ominous it the main character a good person or have they done unforgivable things in the past and now,they’re going to pay their debt for it? ...
Nov 15, 2021
