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Well,this could be what a void would feel if they were a person.I don’t know if that’s what your friend wanted,but it does sound like a poem a void would ...

I think this poem is about more than:”breaking your arm.” It’s about so much attention,it’s stifling.It’s no longer love,it’s drowning in pain.You don’t have the ability to speak.You jus

Hmmm..When I read this short poem,I thought of the saying:”Seeing red” but taken it supposed to be taken literally or is it talking about seeing the world in a bad ...

This was fun to read! Reading your old writing can really show how far you’ve also shows how much you’ve improved.We all have our first writing pieces that don’t sound ...

This is an emotional poem.You can see how much the other person meant-still means-to the narrator.The fact that they would let the other person go shows true love.It’s still losing ...

This was interesting and emotional to read.The dialogue between the two really shows how much they’ve come to know and accept each other.I might read some of your other I ...

I love this song! It really emphasizes how important one person can be in your life.One person can change it all.I also like how you repeated “It’s only you” to ...

This was an interesting song.I would like to know more about this character and what caused them to be so murderous.Maybe they regret hurting others,but can’t help it? Maybe they ...

I’m interested to know more about the meaning behind the this about not being able to express multiple emotions and always feeling lost? Is it about not finding or not ...

This is a lovely story about the relationship between mother and daughter.What a nice twist at the end,too.I’d thought for sure she’d keep the house,with all of the memories attached ...

I liked this poem about light.Light isn’t just light,light can really change lives and cause problems in the all depends on someone’s perspective and how people will view light.This is ...

This is a lovely poem! I love how detailed and descriptive it is,especially when you talk about how toxic this world is and how we should love and not judge.This ...

I enjoyed reading this poem,about burning.Though it’s short,it does have an important meaning to it.Sometimes,we’d achieve so much,it will consume us and no longer feel like will feel like we ...

I loved this poem.You’re using personification.You’re giving the tea candle life.It’s keeping out the darkness in the narrator’s life,that small candle’s light is giving the narrator hope.I

Lovely poem! Short,but teaches us to enjoy life as much as we can,because we’ll never know when it will be taken from us.It’s not too long,it’s just simple,which I feel ...