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  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: Pollen

    Hello there! cleverclogs here for a quick reivew! Your title pulled me into this, as I am also a seasonal allergy sufferer and love to complain about it. Let's revel ...

    May 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Delicate One (Red Velvet Prologue)

    Hello there, and welcome to YWS! cleverclogs here to review! A few nitpicks before I get started on content: “Isn’t she Isaiah?” There should be a comma after "she". I ...

    May 3, 2015
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: The Suicidal Encounter That Saved (Chpt 3)

    Hello there! cleverclogs here to review! Ok So I don't really like this chapter. I'll just be up front with you and say that I didn't like it either. Here ...

    Apr 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Girl Who Wasn't There

    Hello there! cleverclogs here to review! I loved the consistency of the rhyme and rhythm of this poem. Sometimes, poems will start with a rhyme scheme and a rhythm, but ...

    Apr 27, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: Diary in the Time Gap

    Hello there! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! This was so creepy. Seriously. Someone send this to Steven Moffat, because it would make a really good Doctor Who episode. ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: 1000 Cries

    Hello there! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! First of all: I know that this is poetry, but I'd really like it if you either a) spelled out "1000" ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Burnout

    Hello there! cleverclogs here for a Review day review! This was so well-thought out. It's like every word was chosen carefully and precisely. You don't see that a whole lot, ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: The Violin Bow

    Hello there! cleverclogs here for a review day review! This isn't really relevant to the review, but I'd just like to say that the title attracted me to this poem, ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Immoral Love

    Hello there, and welcome to YWS! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! First of all: commas. There are lots of commas in places they shouldn't be, like comma-fetti. For ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I Love Her

    Hello there! cleverclogs here to review! Being a (closeted, at least IRL) member of the LGBT community, this poem totally resonates with me. Now, to the review. I'm sorry if ...

    Apr 17, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Choose Your Heat

    Hi there, and welcome to YWS! cleverclogs here for a quick review! The title attracted me to this poem. It was very inventive and made me want to find out ...

    Apr 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor Re: Finding love in a marriage contract

    Hello there! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! First of all, there are several grammar mistakes with this. A lot of them can be fixed easily, so I'm not ...

    Mar 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: What I Don't Know- Little One

    Hello there! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! Wow. This was impressive. It was suspenseful, entertaining, mysterious, and above all, it leaves me wanting more. You definitely have a ...

    Mar 29, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Sour Pill

    Hello there! cleverclogs here for a review day review! I see from the previous reviews that English is your second language. Can I just say that I wouldn't have known ...

    Mar 29, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Eclipse

    Hello, and welcome to YWS! cleverclogs here for a quick review day review! I love that this was able to be so beautiful and elegant without being overly wordy. It ...

    Mar 29, 2015


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