Tammi

Hello! How can I review this poem? I believe you are an expert author as whatever you've written is just so spontaneous.I feel you've have written down the emotions, at ...

Hello! Can I review this poem? ( asking to myself) -yes. ( a reply to myself) So here we go.. Firstly, I congratulate you on your second post and believe ...

Hey! I am just fifteen but can still relate to the dread you are describing in this beautifully penned poem of yours. I won't comment on the format as the ...

Hello! AWESOME! I really appreciate the way this poem has been written. In fact i suggest you can actually make a song out of this. Just a few more lines ...

Hello! It's good, i would say. And I appreciate how you've stuck to the theme. The rhyme scheme did some good to the poem too. But, i have some short ...

Heeeeeeeeey! I feel so honored and distinguished to be reviewing your work! :P Coming to the poem I like the theme as it is very close to reality. I think ...

Hello! Such a sweet,small poem! It's too good. The last two lines just caught my attention! No suggestions, except: add a suitable period at the end of second line. This ...

Hello! I am like your idea of short poems, they are, i don't know why?-"cute"! The first one- Oh! I loved it so much. I am going to sing that ...

Dear friend, Awesome story line. I like those stories which do not conclude something emphatically. The soft way of delivering the importance of parental guidance is so perfectly portrayed in ...

Hello! Wonderful idea! Amazing and unique theme! CoNgRaTuLaTiOnSS!! The refrain is very nice and catchy. It is the sort that i would love to push in a conversation between my ...

HeLlO! Quick review found you! Basically, i liked the theme of your poem. It's original and encouraging. But, there are a lot of poems already on this topic, so if ...

Hello! Your poem is wonderfully penned. Rhyme schemes enchant me, and in this poem you have inculcated such a superior rhyme scheme. Besides, i don't know what it is like ...

Hey TZH! I am overwhelmed by your poem. Firstly, thanks a million times for writing this beautiful poem. I am surely going to note it down in my diary. Secondly, ...

WOW! hey there! I actually started singing this song and it is so good! Hope you write this good forever. Though i have a suggestion for you that whenever you ...

Hello! such an innovative topic to write poem! Woah! Now, basically you don't allow us to find any grammatical errors in this poem as it is all about you making ...