To
Construct A Lyric
I
am told ‘E’ is for casual participants so
I will
abandon my ordinary claws.
How hard can it ‘b’ to
withdraw
conditions of loyalty
from huge trunk mammoths or
actions of doors?
I don’t doubt my concision
will
suffer, but finding opposition
who court this twin antagonist is
no problama.
Absurd
if you will pardon my
français
but I wish to play no
additional
parts in your grammar wars.
My vocabulary is bankrupt;
I own
words but lack apparatus
with which to apply
my solutions.
I
think I will omit 'Z' in forthcoming productions.
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Ahaaaaaannnn ! Nice one humourous or sarcasm . Dont know exactly
But yes I like it while reading...
I like two sentences though
" I don't doubt my concision
Will suffer, but finding opposition. "
Very nice selection and emotions I can figure out through these lines. You carve few lines really well.
Hope to see some more homourous sarcasm from you. Nice penning dear. Keep writing. Blessings!
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Hello!
such an innovative topic to write poem! Woah!
Now, basically you don't allow us to find any grammatical errors in this poem as it is all about you making grammatical errors but a small suggestion is always worthy and so i suggest you that when you are writing some off-track poems try to inculcate a rhyme scheme. Trust me it literally emphasizes your thoughts.
Lastly, i liked your poem but i couldn't get much of it. Maybe my vocabulary is too poor OR maybe the poem makes no sense!
But i know its simply because my vocabulary is too poor!;-) but you too should work on refining it for a few times.
I think it can become better then!
loves..