PixieStix

Hey! I'm here to review you're work for requested. Alright, so I have some pretty usefull pointers here. ~When starting a sentence, try not to use the word 'I' so ...

Hey, Sparkie! - I know, cheesy nickname- But...I'm here to review you're poem! :D Alright, so I loovvvee the titel, made me want to read it instantly because it reminded ...

Hey Abigail! I'm Katie and will be reviewing you're...wonderfull poem today. This was very interesting, to be honest. I really got the vibe about the royalty and about the truth. ...

Hey! Pixie here to review! I really like this peice to be honest, though I see some things that could be made even better! the format and the font. Maybe ...

Hey, Pixie here to review this poem! To start off, somehow, when I read this, I pictured it as a short story. It was actually like you were there in ...

OMAR! *Tackles* You're writing! Yay! Okay. Okay. I'm reviewing now, if you do not mind. :D Alright, so....I like the idea you have here. Very, very good plot. Though, I ...

Wow. This poem is very good, to be honest. Though, I've found some grammical mistakes~ In the...nineth line. You shouldn't put "cuz'. Try "'cause." But overall there wasn't anything wrong! ...

Hey yubbies! Pix here to review for you! I really like these haiku's! They are better than the one's I've tried to write... *Shudders* Anyways, The one I've had to ...

Hey, Pix here to review! I really like this poem you've written. There wasn't anything I could really find was wrong with it. I also like the title you've added ...

Hey! Pix here! Alright, so I really liked this peice and I think it's a different kind of poetry then I usually read, And that's a good thing because I ...

Hey, Dreamwalker! Here to review you're poem. Let's start with the bad things. Save the best for last, right? Well, I think you could've done a bit better in this ...

Happy review day! Alright so I found this peice very interesting, to be honest. This was very detailed, though I like how you worded most of it. This is very, ...

Happy review day! Alright so I think this poem has very much potential. You're trying to tell the reader that you're just like anyone else. It's very good. The way ...

Hey, Pix here! I really like this peice. Though, I don't really understand the way you peiced it. Like- The 645 is whipped out and aimed at me, while a ...

Pix here to review! I'm going to start off with the thinks I liked. -This poem is very detailed and well-spoken. It's very interesting, the way you peiced it with ...