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Hey, Pix here to review!
I really like this poem you've written. There wasn't anything I could really find was wrong with it. I also like the title you've added for it, gave a really good meaning to the poem as well. It was descriptive and very amazing in a way, gave the poem heart-felt emotion. You could really feel what you were feeling while writing it.
Overall, I would give this an 8/10.
~Katie
Wow, that was very interesting, I liked it alot, you weren't able to quit grasp the meaning till the end, and thats a good tactic to keep the reader interested, if i were you, I'd add more about the accident and your connection to the person, readers like to see a bit of backstory, it helps them connect better with the author. Over all it was quite fantastic
Keep writing and let me know when you post more, you most definitely have the talent.