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Peace Nyumbaiza

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Internal Battleground

    Hey there MysteryMe that poem is totally BRILLIANT!! I've been reading a numerous number of poems and I have to admit that I have never come across a poem like ...

    Jan 3, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: One Day

    Hey there! Great poem! I really liked it, it is simply brilliant how you use your words to create a picture of worry and fear into my mind, I call ...

    Jan 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Today I had a Bath

    I really like you poem, it is really amazing and brilliant idea! I think I understand exactly that same idea behind this poem. Its full of personality and it is ...

    Jan 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Invincible

    I like your poem very much, as it expresses your feelings in a very clear and honest way,and I do feel like you put a lot of effort into this ...

    Jan 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Existence

    I love it! I think your poem is different and unique in every way possible, you made me feel exactly what you were writing, and you made me think,and your ...

    Jan 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: To Live or Love

    I really like the originality in this poem,its really different and that is why I enjoyed it so much! However I would have like you to fill in the spaces ...

    Dec 22, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Ding, Dong, Ding

    Hey there! I really liked this poem,I liked how you described the city with so much detail,and flavor,it really shows that you put a lot of passion and effort into ...

    Dec 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Heart of Mine

    Nice shot poem! Maybe a little too short, I feel like it could have been a bit long, I was on the edge waiting for something more and I didn't ...

    Dec 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Just because

    Hello:)...Nice poem,I really liked it, your choice of words,and the way you described the characters, made it so much more real for the reader and much more interesting! Well written, ...

    Dec 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Yet I Do Not Fight

    Hey there! Nice poem, I enjoyed it, however I would suggest that you try using more fluent sentences,to make the poem a bit more understandable,and also use punctuation,such as full ...

    Dec 22, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Language as you like

    Hey there! This was a very smart piece,and a smart poem can only be written with a smart mind. I can see that you have been writing for a long ...

    Dec 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: before i wake

    Hello. Nice poem, great concept. It was simple yet not to obvious,and it was full of personality and detail. I like how the poem has a life of its own ...

    Dec 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Up on the hill

    Wow! This was a very interesting poem, and I enjoyed every bit of it. First your choice of words and grammar were excellent. I love how you describe to the ...

    Dec 21, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: My Only Release

    Hey there :) I like your poem so much. The topic was well represented in the piece,and it is something that everyone can relate to in one way or an ...

    Dec 21, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: At the playground.

    Hey. I liked how you painted an image and idea in my mind already,which is a great thing to do as a writer already at the beginning of the poem,I ...

    Dec 21, 2013


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