Mysticalxx

Um......alright, definitely interesting, but.....I may be lacking brains, but I truly don't understand what this is about. Hehe. :D There are, however, a few corrections you could make: 1. 'The ...

Great, great, great poem! It is literally the story of my life, as I am always struggling with the dilemma to accept others' help or not. Really neat, I must ...

Hahaha, I love the novelty of this idea and your humorous style of writing. Though I personally am in favour of Right Brain :D, I agree that Left Brain is ...

I like it! Particularly because I agree with the subject of the poem: I too prefer straightforwardness over complication and "beating around the bush". :) So, it's a good poem. ...

Good one! You've done anice job with narration and that stuff, and the ending is really funny. However, you've done a teeny error that you've made some lines too long, ...

I LOVE this! It's so short, cute, funny, jokey, amusing! (Wow, so many adjectives). It's really good, I especially like the second line : I wandered through fields of whipped ...

Haha! I can see you researched slang quite well, and usually slng annoys me (when people are speaking it, that is) this one amused me very much. You've done a ...

Hahaha! I'd love to have seen this happen! The story is really well written, and you've justified writing the point of view of a three year old boy. One thing ...

When I first read it, I didn't get it! (being the dense person I am) but now I see the humour in it! Good job! HILARIOUS, actually, the last line ...

Good one! It was quite amusing, and I like it! I even like the style of the uncapitalized letters at the beginning of each line. :) One thing: The "chest ...

Hahahaha! For an elementary school kid (how old is he? seven or eight?) that is very good as well as funny. It IS good. You've kept the tenses right, and ...

AWESOME POEM. It is so beautiflul. I couldn't help marvelling as I read it. It is so..........raw beauty and description. There might be a few grammatical errors, but I'll ignore ...

Aha, well, I'm not usually a fan of romantic poetry, but this one was really good. My fav. stanza is the second one. Just one thing: When you write "my ...

I love this one as well as the one "You are always doing something". I've read many of your works, and your strong point is being simple and straightforward. :) ...

Nice poem! I particularly liked the way you ended each stanza with the same line; it gives a lyrical feel to the poem. And my favourite stanza has to be ...