Mysticalxx

Yeah, like anyone would reply, 'Yeah, sure, Madam. I'd love a feisty punch to my face'. :) I don't know what to comment, as I'm not sure if this writing ...

Haha, very creative! Although the same could be written about other foods, such as....I don't know. But this was really very good. It could've been written better, but this effort ...

I absolutely love it! Hahaha, I feel exactly the same way! I hat people taking my books except for my very close friends. The poem is simple and straightforward and ...

Hey, I like this no matter how much you don't! Firstly, because it describes perfectly the difficulties we writers have to face, not knowing what ideas to choose because as ...

Wow, good poem! The simplicity of the language and the writing style speak for themselves! Although very simple, not everyone can write like this. Good one. The line "' I ...

HAHAHA! I LOVE the poem. It sent me into fits (quiet fits, though, since people were around), but still, fits. Thumbs up! Your rhyming is perfect and makes the poem ...

I don't really like cats, but this was a good poem. I've had many cats during my thirteen years of life (:)) SO I've gotten a bit fed up of ...

I like this poem! It truly convey the feeling of what childhood is all about. I especially like the last two lines: "And being creative is never all for naught,as ...

I liked the flow of this poem, and the sense of rhyming even though the words don't really rhyme. I especially like the first three lines, as they are so ...

Wow..............I liked this poem a lot. Firstly, your rhyming sense is really great and all the words rhyme at the end. Secondly......the theme of the poem is dark, which I ...

For a first poem, this is a good effort. Your usage of figurative language is really good, as all the metaphors and similes give a good impression. The only error ...

Firstly, I sympathise with your plight as bullying is something I have been a victim of many years. Honestly, nice people are hard to come by these days. You are ...

his was a wonderful article! There are a few grammatical errors, but I feel too lazy to point them out. Overall, you've done a good job explaining the essence of ...

Alright, morbid alert! :) The sentence '' I witchcraft your mind and dry your tears'' doesn't make sense. The term I WITCHCRAFT YOUR MIND is grammatically incorrect. It should be ...

Hi! I have to sat that these poems.......confused me. First of all, you have not thought of the word count at all; haiku have the 5/7/5 syllable rule. Second, some ...