Hey there The Unknown Writer! The Silent Bagpipe here to do a review of your work!
Ok so first off let me just say that this poem was really quite amazing. I loved how you explained writing, and I loved your tittle for it *thumbs up* Great Job! In all truthfulness this is exactly what writing, for me, is all about! The words I can't say I write down <3 Very cool how you wrote this, I am a fan.
Writing is more or less saying things we could never say. That's why most songs and poems are emotional. Great job with the describing and creativeness!
My favorite lines were these -
"My mind pours out words overfilling the brim of my consciousness.
They cascade down my head choking my throat.
Yearning to be free; to be listened to."
Loved it <3
~The Silent Bagpipe
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