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Hi there, weallfeardeath. I think your piece lacks organization, there are problems with the punctuation, and abuse of capitalization. The beginning was neat, for it compliments the title and stimulat

Hi there. The appearance makes it difficult for the reader to actually want to read, for it lacks punctuation and capitalization, and that makes most people lazy. It'd be a ...

Wow! Love it! I think many people can relate to this (At Least Believers xD); it was short, but neat! I only found a little mistake. "You are wrong, (

Wooooooooooo! ^_^ One of the most enjoyable poems I have read. It's sweet and simple, but very truthful, and beautiful from the beginning to the end. The only thing I ...

Hi, Angie. :) Short, concise, and to the point. It flows well, and it's nice. But it doesn't show me your view of the world, for they are simply words ...

Hello, Zee! This is once nice poem you've got here. For some reason it reminds me of The Grinch, lol, but I never told you that. Just one suggestion; I'd ...

Hi, Angie. I like your poem, and love the words. If anything, I'd organize it better and make look more uniform. I would make stanzas, and I would try to ...

Chooooooooooooooooooco! This kind of poems are the one that I like the most! Optimistic! Brilliant! With a beautiful rhythm! Where you can see the writter hidding in between every line! ...

Hi Gaze. I'm GeeLee, and I'm going to review for you today. I like the subject you're bringing us. I love how real it sounds; how you are being you ...

Just one word: MAGIC! Wonderful, Twin!!

Bobby, my friend. :) What a belligerent story. I am not much for stories like this; bloody scenes, I mean. But I wouldn't be here doing this review if your ...

Jesus Christ! :o Kid, this is awesome! o_____o Wish I could hear it. But seriously, deep stuff, greatly expressed with something new. "No need to waste time with prophecy We ...

Hahah. Hi! This is amazing. I love it, it's short and sweet and to the point

Hm... Hi Yatta! This is pretty interesting. I like the main idea of your piece. But you could get more words out of it, more feelings, more explanation. You could ...

Hi there, anaischordas. :) This poem is lovely. It flows beautifully. It's very nice. If anything, I don't have something that I actually dislike about it when it comes to ...