ForeverYoung299

Oh!!! I was just heart-broken. I know the pain of losing friends... Many of my best friends left school and that also without any warning. It left my heart broken. ...

Hello!!! I am glad that you posted again and u are writing! Please continue it. You are an awesome writer! I am awestruck by your poem. To tell the truth, ...

Hello! Here for a review!! Two emotions, One body. Bittersweet. I guess the punctuations might not be correct. Maybe u could put a dash instead of full stop before bittersweet. ...

Hello!!! Here for a review!! Oh this depression!! It's taking over the world. We all want to be free of depression and we want to live like ourselves!!! But... I ...

Hello! Here for a review!! I guess recently all the writers are facing this problem–lack of ideas! I saw one or two more poetries on the same topic. Sometime ago, ...

Hello! Forever here for a short review!!! It was a wonderful and a great read! I don't have words to express my feelings. I really like reading short poems. Life ...

Hello. First of all, welcome to YWS! Now, straight to the review. Well in my world, all those stories are true. Well maybe not Goldilocks and the Three Bears, cause ...

Hello! Here for a review!!! The picture is very beautiful!!!! I loved it. Now coming to the review... It was really‘eyes could not capture the beauty of nature’! Then what ...

Hello!!Here for a review! I am reviewing your work for the first time, I guess. The boy is playing with chalk Can u put an ‘a’ before chalk or maybe ...

Hello!! Here for a review!! I really enjoyed reading your poem!! It was so relatable ! I could relate each and every word of your poem... The rhyming is not ...

Hello maple! Here for a review. You two are doing great! Well were not going to stop them just the three of us. This line is a bit vague. Great! ...

Hello. I am really spellbound by yours and Maple's effort! I have a few suggestions to give– (leaning against a truck, whispering) All right, Surge. So where to next after ...

Hello. Here for a review! Although I like free verse, but I think this would have been better if it were written in a rhythm. Well, I am trying... He ...

Hello. Here for a review. It will be extremely short cuz I don't have much complaints about it. I really liked the topic– time. It's because of time that all ...

Hello. Here for a review. You two did a good job collabing such a beautiful poem! It is actually too relatable. The descriptions and metaphors u gave there were actually ...