When I Write

Hey there! MapleWay here dropping by with a quick review!

This was a nice little poem! I really enjoyed the topic as well! I honestly don't think there was a better way to describe writing. It is like nothing else. And when you finish it. Oh, how I love that feeling! It one of the main reasons I write. When it comes to the rhyme scheme it was a bt inconcistant. But otherwise great poem! Thanks for tagging me! Make sure you do it again next time you post!

- MapleWay

An Eldritch Tome here for a little review.
First of all, I liked that you wrote a poem about how you write. I thought it was very neat. Going with that, I like how you put the lines in between stanzas.
One thing I noticed was you wrote this:
"It all comes natural"
Unless you want it to say that, which I doubt you meant to, you should change it to "naturally".
(Also like ForeverYoung said, you should probably change it to flow better. )
Other than that, great job and keep it up.
I look forward to your other poems.
~Zacharias Drake

Like the rhyming scheme, however, if you are trying to make every second line rhyme, the second and fourth line of the second stanza doesn't exactly rhyme when read out loud. I know it seems to, but personally, it doesn't flow as good as the other lines.

I also suggest changing the first and third line of the last stanza

Hello!! Here for a review!!

I really enjoyed reading your poem!! It was so relatable ! I could relate each and every word of your poem... The rhyming is not the best but good I think. You can simply remove those asterisks sign. They are of no need. One can understand stanzas with the gaps only. They are mainly used to denote parts of chapters or story.
With the wording and the rhyme, I have only one suggestion–

It all comes natural