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It is a really good poem I wonder why? lol I think you should write some more on your feelings. It makes the work able to relate to. I think ...

This is a very good poem. I enjoyed how easy it was to read, but that doesn't mean not to go bigger. I think it would be helpful if you ...

This is a really good poem! So far you are an amazing writer. I can't find any mistakes, but then again I'm only starting out... I really like the detail ...

Thank you for that. It's actually nice to see something different then, "It's so you can express yourself." It gets old this is a breath of fresh air. I also ...

I really liked this; how personal it was. sometimes I feel that there is no hope as well. I truly believe sometimes there is nothing to look forward to. It ...

This I have to say is very funny. I liked the wording and short little information spots. I really thought the ending was funny. I also enjoyed hearing them go ...

This is really good and I think that you've noticed you put one instead of once. Anyway this is really good, but I'd like to see more detail. Otherwise this ...

I've been reading poems all day, but I've have yet to see such personification as yours. I love that you put so many earth elements and it really shines through. ...

This makes so much since it hurts..... You can be two people, but one how this is because you have many different actions. so i understand your poem. I get ...

This is a great way to put so much meaning into words. even without exclamation I hear frustration and awe. You did a great job on showing her character, but ...

This is a very good poem and I like how you made this rime it kind of made it more light heart-ed. Even though this is about morning your brothers ...

I'm sorry, but I sort of laughed. It was dark yes but I'm friends with many "emos" and even someone who hears voices it just made me realize how real ...

so much symbolism it's great! I love your work here the little captions were great. I can see you are older and most likely more advanced than me, but if ...

This is one of the best poems I've read...You should publish some books if you haven't yet, for I believe you can do much more than poetry. your words are ...

You are becoming a great writer! I think you should check out some of my work, for we are the same age I think it could help. :) I love ...