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Steph, very touching poem and great message. I'm sure many people can relate to this because smoking and drinking has destroyed many families. I found a few grammar mistakes such ...

Great Job Gilberto. Very sweet poem. Few spelling mistake (walk / heart...) but other than that, it's cute. I agree with Mihaivisan, print it and give it to her. LOL. ...

Jorge. This is a nice poem; I picture the Keys the same way (boating, family...). A few mistakes for ex: I think you meant "darker". I'm not too sure about ...

Nikki, you say the Love can't be described, but you did a pretty good job doing so. I found minor grammar erros (stabs...), but no biggy. Good job, keep writing. ...

A little short for what I was expecting, but I liked how you defined college as a "battle". Keep writing. Hurtado

Beautiful prose poem, especially the end. You express your graditude very well. I liked your style of repetition. I'm under the impression they have passed by your line "will always ...

Brigette, this is so deep and beautiful, you must share this with her on Mother's Day. Better than any Hallmark card, there is nothing more meaningful than the words from ...

Great poem Yohana; your words are very true. Many people prefer to act ignorant because they fear they can't handle the truth. I liked how you ended with a question, ...

Michigo. This piece seems pretty complicated, but you did a good job expressing your annoyance with people who expect too much from you. Nice prose and I can sense your ...

Good job in expressing your emotions. Also, I liked how you sort of blame your reactions and feelings to the "chemicals" in your brain. Not sure if the term "chemicals" ...

Van, beautiful poem and good rhyming. I also like the comparison with water. Keep writing!!!

Good job Pavel, keep writing. Yet, I won't speak to you about my faith, but if you ever want me to answer some of your "unanswered questions", I'll gladly give ...

Good job, keep writing. Liked your style of repetition; kind of reminded me of the song "I will survive" .

Great job Anjekat. You did a wonderful job bringing this piece of writing to life with your use of imagery words and power verbs. However, I would choose a better ...

Great job. Very similar to a prose we a touch of repetition (don't, don't, don't...) the repetition gives it a touch of attitude. I would love to say these words ...