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Review Day continues; so do I. Plot: It does nicely to create a realistic situation. Pacing is excellent, drawing out the suspense. You could draw it out a bit more, ...

Here I am! Review you like a hurricane! So, beginning with plot as always. There's not much to say here. I do appreciate the lull in the story, which is ...

Excellent, excellent, excellent! Let's continue! First off, the plot. To be blunt, it's good. The argument is an excellent continuation, and it does well to bolster the characters' feud. It's ...

Review Day, murder faker. Let's begin with plot. Again, the logic behind it is sound. It also offers a unique suspense with the situation, tinged with a bit of hopelessness. ...

Happy Review Day! Let's begin with plot, shall we? First thought: who put the dagger in his chest? It'd be intriguing if he had done it himself, and could be ...

Oh, hey. You wrote another one. Well, this seems to place the conflict earlier than in Insult to Injury. There's nothing wrong with it, I just hope you don't run ...

And here's the final, 50th review! So to start, you're using the pacing perfectly for character development. While I feel like it might be too precise, I'll get into that ...

This is certainly an improvement. But I can't help but feel that it's a little clipped. Don't get me wrong, the words you use are powerful for their shortness. But ...

Oh, my. That really was completely terrifying. Seriously, nice job manipulating the reader. Making them hate Mercy at the start, then gradually grow to like her as the situation worsened, ...

You know, it's nice to see good things happen, even if it's only good in comparison. Well, you certainly know how to structure a novel! Not only did you introduce ...

Ah, the action! The excitement! As always, the plot is moving forward with extreme bravado. It seemed a bit too easy to break out, but you may or may not ...

Well, it's nice to see the plot picking up. It's about time they started plotting to bust out. After something as horrible as the shock therapy, it certainly moves the ...

Just...one...more... Well then, this story's certainly been impressing me. Amara doesn't seem to trust Arjana fully, which is completely understandable and makes for a much more complicated situation,

Another review for you. Well, I've gotten a pretty good grasp of the plot by now. As has been said, these people seem a little too gullible. Perhaps you could ...

I have no context for this chapter. However, it's Review Day. Now, as far as plot goes, it's definitely intriguing! Seeing Amara's defiance makes the reader wonder what could possibly ...