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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 31 Part 3

    Hello, Noelle! I am here for my last review today! I hope all these notifications for reviews haven't been too hard on you! Now let us see what we have ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 31 Part 2

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let us see what we have right here! That first paragraph is really redundant at one point where Akia says that she thought ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 31 Part 1

    Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! I hate that my reviews are so short but my knowledge on writing is a bit limited because of my lack of experience and ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 30

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... I love how Rhys thinks that what he did was correct and what other people think ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 29 Part 2

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... Now I am going to say that your idea of a farm is quite strange. Rice ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 29 Part 1

    Hello! KatyaElefant here with another review! Let's see what we have right here... I just wanted to talk about the irony of that elderly lady. XD She is like you ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 28 Part 2

    Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... OH! You are using Raven's nickname for Falyn! Oh my gosh! Now I can call her Fay! ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 28 Part 1

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let us see what we have right here... The way that you described that the houses were different, really displayed that they weren't ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 27

    Hello, KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have here... Why is everyone still so mean to Zeke? I mean he saved them somewhat and then he actually ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 26 Part 2

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... So how does Akia know that Seth was taken away against his own will into another ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 26 Part 1

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! GUESS WHAT? This is going to be my 200th review! I am super pumped about this! Let us get reviewing! Wait? All of ...

    Mar 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 25 Part 2

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... I wish there was some more imagery with Falyn daydreaming about her going out with Zeke. ...

    Mar 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 25 Part 1

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Wolfare1 has been complaining how most of what my reviews are for this novel is just me ranting at the characters. I guess ...

    Mar 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 24 Part 2

    Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! You must be getting SO MANY notifications stating that I'm reviewing your works. XD It must be A LOT of stuff to read and ...

    Mar 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 24 Part 1

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... Why would Akia be the only one who was put in a room like that? There ...

    Mar 5, 2015


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