An Ending - needs work (Any ideas?)

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An Ending

The solitary man.
At the top of the cliff.
Looked about. At
All the beauty. And
Wondered why a world so
Beautiful, could have
So much sadness.
The once lovely sound of
Waves, breaking.
Became lonely, hard
Tormenting.
The bright skies;
Moody, dark, painful.
And all the agony,
Welled up.
He screamed. Turned
To sobbing.
No point, he thought.
And dropped.




----------------------------------- This needs some work, i know, but where to start.... possibly a better title as well?
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A little choppy but the subject is good. Perhaps you should ditch the periods. And as for the title, "Ending" is nice.
when there's nowhere to go, it's time to grow up.




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I love the title. Cutting the periods like Chevy said would make it alot better, I think. Good poem though. I like it alot. :)
Siempre, siempre: jardin de mi agonia,
tu cuerpo fugitivo para siempre,
la sangre de tus venas en mi boca,
tu boca ya sin luz para mi muerte.

-From 'Del amor imprevisto', Federico Garcia Lorca




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Thanks for the advice. I'll get to it right now.
-Nothing, like something, can happen anywhere.



A cynic is a man who knows the price of everything, and the value of nothing.
— Oscar Wilde