Because History Is Written the Way I See Fit

Yes, because it's called perception. Am I right? Am I right!? And, for lack of feedback, I end with that.

How realistic and literal. God, that's when I love it the most. I loved the last stanza...it would end perfectly at one of my unreleased poems. *Looks around*

For some reason, this poem made me think of Chevrolet and myself...don't know why but sometimes your poems can put weird effects on me. And,

"with God for a neon sign
and a vacancy."

How clever.

Hmm... this is exactly why I listen to my dad. *forgets why*
Nice job...
Now that i think of it, your style seems akwrd to me... no offence or anything but periods in the middle of the line of a stanza makes you breathe in the wrong places...

Tsk tsk tsk, this guy needs to stop eating sugar and slow down...