for Nick, 'Tendrils of Gaze' (needs work...)

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You are so very fragile that I feel forced
to suffocate you in bubblewrap and enclose you
in a cardboard box (this side up) and send
you (my poetry) through UPS, addressed to me.

tsk tsk tsk :P naughty little you
poor mail man

nice work you sack of brad




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Is this too short, too sympathetic, or just bad all around? I can't decide.
Nick's picture is on my blog.
"If I have not seen as far as others, it is because giants were standing on my shoulders." -Hal Abelson




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not too short, not too sympathetic and not bad.
And I saw his pic.

happy now?




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Yes, I am.
"If I have not seen as far as others, it is because giants were standing on my shoulders." -Hal Abelson




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The last stanza made me laugh...marshmallow...hehe. Maybe something like 'wax'? I'm not sure. The marshmallow makes it sound très stupid.
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- Demetri Martin




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Eh... It was kind of sappy... I know, I shouldn't be one to talk about sappiness... Lovely, I guess I can say, yet it made me laugh throughout... but it's not bad or short.




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hm...who is this Nick...

*goes to brads blog*
when there's nowhere to go, it's time to grow up.



I'm also not sure why but even though I normally wear cool tones I have a feeling red would have been my color in the 1860s.
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