Young Writers Society

I did this for a creative writing class last year. I didn't get much good feedback. So! Trying again with a few more competent writers. It may require minor editing ...

Something a little older, recently reworked just a bit. Thought I'd give it a go. -- A star high in the heavens Falls gloriously to earth Streaking through the night ...

Hey all I'm new and just wanting to see what ya'll think of some of writing. This was my very first poem I wrote in about three years and was ...

[EDIT: fifth draft] i was thrust and the womb of the world opened up springing forth i rose dripping from this birthplace and opened my eyes i cry for comfort ...

I know, it's astounding. I did some poetry. It's probably terrible, but I di d it. It's for a competition at school. The topic we were given was gravity. Soft ...

Here's the entire chapter. (I know you're thinking FINALLY). Half of it is 2nd draft, so beware and have fun. The more corrections I get, the better. CHAPTER 2 Word ...

Here's my poem all ready for the nice critiscm it's going to be put through. Oh woe what have I done! Lol, enjoy! I’m sitting here believing, I’m bleeding, And ...

Work in progress. Help me make it better. ******************* Caught my hand from turning on the blinker tonight, Caught myself from getting on the highway… Those lost highways Highways that ...

there are too many teeth in the sky and when tears collect in its large blue eye it knows there is no backing out: it must cry though silence! what ...

touching lips to ear i revel in the vastness of our closeness his voice dripping ambrosia aphrodisiac filling my soul drunk on his speaking i speak my own wine sparkling ...

he opened my eyes opened my thighs kissed me sucked my soul banished my fear bit my ear touched me ate me alive tore out my heart spread me apart ...

I remember his nose I remember because we never spoke of it I can see it in my mind’s eye pictured perfectly I never saw his nose I never saw ...

peppermint whispers ‘please’ her eyes defiant I know she wants me the way she cocked her head licked her lips beckoned me to the stairwell her costume revealing just enough ...

The jab cross to your nose makes something give way it bleeds a lot Your nose Your face is smeared with the stuff grotesque really no crimson droplets glistening like ...