I loved it in a nut shell.
There is nothing more to say.
It was my perfect idea for a poem, and I think you have done justice with it.
I think the use of enjambment in the first stanza is used very creatively and adds a whole new level to the piece.
liquid rainbows pour into the unused space around us.
That is excellent imagery and my favourite part to the poem
Well done.
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~Retro Disco666
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