Hi, there! I'm here to leave you a review.
As someone with an unstable relationship with my father, this hit very close to home. He's someone I do not trust, and someone I have had difficulty repairing my relationship with.
So, emotionally, I'm in love with this and the elements of truth that come with it. I can only hope that you aren't writing this based off of personal experience, and if you are, my condolences. I promise you are not alone in feeling this way, and my PM's are always open <3.
This line really spoke to me, and I'd like to talk about it a little.
The comfortable silence between them
Gradually grows uncomfortable
Though it's the most simple stanza, I felt the emotion of this instantly. As a child and even growing into the daughter's teen years, there's this sort of image that's created of her father that paints him as a protector--a caretaker. As her mind grows and develops, however, that image begins to fade and is replaced with questions; doubts. The "comfort" she finds within her father's gaze starts to disappear as his words of encouragement are replaced with hate. It's a very real thing that a lot of us have experienced with either our mother or father. and while sad, it makes us much more aware of the world around us and its dangers.
In terms of technical problems, once again your work has proven to be flawless. It's simple enough that I can understand your meaning easily, but it also holds an element of mystery--which is why I was curious as to whether or not you've gone through this experience personally. You're a very smart writer that appeals to all sorts of audiences.
Thank you for sharing (and keep writing!)
Claria
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