Wesh! Professor Jade here for a quick review.
This is a very relatable poem. Here is my pro and con list.
PROS:
Flow and rhyme scheme is good. I could see this as a song but maybe specify what music it is. And what instrument. Pop and piano? Country and guitar?
CONS: Is a bit repetitive and not nearly long enough. Add stanzas between the verses maybe?
Overall: I liked it! Keep up the good work and I hope to read some more of your work soon.
-Professor JadeLotus
Points: 1578
Reviews: 232
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